Friday, August 24, 2007

Test Blurb Stealing Carmen

Would you read this book? If you like it, why? If you dont. Why? Thanks for helping out. These things have to be less than 130 words and sell the book. Needless to say, I hate writing them.

Stealing Carmen
By Gail Faulkner

Jack knew all about secrets. The government trusted him to keep them, find them, exploit them. Home for a short rest from that world, he hadn’t meant to overhear his sexy neighbor’s darkest desires. Being the focus of those wicked wishes was news to him.

Introducing Carmen to the fantasy of being a submissive was a mission he didn’t expect to last long. He certainly didn’t expect her to show him natural sensuality that brought him to his knees.

A lifetime of looking at the other side of the fence brought a man to this. Investing more than he could afford and it wasn’t cash. Carmen came with a dangerous price. One he’d willingly pay to keep this woman safe in his arms.

9 comments:

Kerin said...

Yep - I only read as far as "By Gail Faulkner" and I was hooked!

Gail said...

LOL. You're a lot of help Kerin. Thank you.

Anonymous said...

As someone who does look at the synposis (spelled wrong I know) I liked the mix of the exotic with a little bit of suspension. It would pull me in and make me want to read it. Hopefully that helps a little.

Jennifer K. said...

I'm with Kerin. I don't have to read the synopsis. If it's got your name on it, I want it. ... although, I do like my HEAs, so I don't know if I'd be so keen on your pure erotica. All the other 11 or so you're working on, though, they're mine! Mine, mine, mine.

I know. I'm picky. And greedy. Hey, are you done with 'em yet? Cause I want 'em all.

Nikki H. said...

I hate to be a sheep, but I'm with Kerin and Jennifer on this one. After reading Ghost Ship (plus 2 others), I'm hooked. However, I will admit that if I had not known your name, the synopsis was definitely enough to tempt me into buying this book.

Nikki H. said...

Okay, I meant Ghost Unit!

Kelly said...

Okay count me in as buying it cause your name is there. But there's something missing or something. Maybe you could re arrange ait a bit and say more about Carmen? I'm no writer,but have an idea if you want it,email me. Maybe it'll explain want I mean a little better

Gail said...

Thank you all!

Jennifer, you're such a supportive soul. That's the word I choose to use instead of greedy. LOL

Anon- Yep, it helps Thank you.

Nikki- Aw thanks. Ghost Unit guys appreciate the support. They are willing to get physical with thier thanks. LOL

Kelly, I'm emailig your eagle eye now. LOL

Susan said...

That's like dangling chocolate in front of me..:) It definitely snared me with suspense, intrigue and a sexy man with secrets, mixed with an erotic relationship. Sounds like a winner to me.