Thursday, July 12, 2007

What I'm working on- Warning, Adult Content

Some of the words have been changed or whole phrases cut in an effort to reach PG-13 for this segment. Not sure it's working. I just enjoyed Troy's point of view in this moment.

TROY-
Marilyn’s hand slipped in the elastic waist of his sweats. Suspended above her, his body was easy to reach. Open handed she traveled down his groin, letting hot flesh glaze the side of her thumb until she reached her goal. Grasping firmly she gently pulled down. His mouth released her breast and his head jerked up to glare at her.

“What are you doing?” he demanded softly, his lower body resisting the tug.

“Arranging body parts where I want them,” she smiled into his fierce eyes.

“Not your call, baby. You want something to forgive in the morning, you’ll have to let me be in charge of the sinning.”

Marilyn slowly released the sensitive globes and her hand moved up hard flesh as she measured him. “But there is a large part of you that really doesn't object,” she countered as his eyes narrowed on her.

“That’s not the part in charge.”

Her thumb stroked across the wide head, spreading silky liquid over the sensitive nerve endings. Troy closed his eyes briefly as she stroked him. “I’m not going to forgive you in the morning,” he told her darkly.

“What?”

“I said, I’m not going to forgive you in the morning. You’re the only one here who’s interested in being Christian about this. You decide to take over, what happens next is on you.”

“That sounds like a threat,” Marilyn murmured. “What happens next if I take over?” Her hand released him reluctantly as she frowned up into the intensely beautiful man looming over her.

He regarded her in silence a moment. “Let’s not go there. Okay? I know what I’m doing. When we’re done you’ll agree with me, I promise.”

“And if I don’t?

“You made a choice, Marilyn. You chose me. You can change your mind about wanting me anytime, you can’t about who’s going to be the man between us. I don’t switch.”

6 comments:

Kelly said...

I think I'm gonna like Troy

Rhian / Crowwoman said...

Just read Wanna Play. I was already excited that another Ghost Unit book was coming out but after reading it, all I can say is Wow! What a fantastic story! That was a brilliant, awesome read - thank you ever so much! Looking forward to the next one!

byrdloves2read said...

Love it when a man knows his place! LOL

Gail said...

Thank you so much Rhian! And thanks for taking the time to tell me you enjoyed it. I know plunking down your money to buy it should be enough, but we authors are just needy ya know. We want to know how you "felt" about it. grin

GAIL<--very sure Kelly will like Troy. lol

Laughin with Linda. I'm so hoping you like him. I suspect you'll have to the opportunity to tell me long before it's published. LOL

Mandy said...

My biggest question when will Troy be available to buy? I loved Wanna Play and can't wait to read Troy, Jackson, and Charlie's stories!! Really I can't wait to read anything you right!! I love your sense of humor and I can loose my self in your stories, the characters and supporting characters are so real and well developed that you feel like you know them. Hope the next story comes out soon!!

Gail said...

Mandy, thank you so much. The encouragement is greatly appreciated. I don't have a publish date for Troy at this time. I'm workin on it though. grin